[extropy-chat] VP Summit - Press Release - Comments Please!
natashavita at earthlink.net
natashavita at earthlink.net
Fri Jan 30 23:36:35 UTC 2004
From: JDP jacques at dtext.com
>Great initiative and nice press release. I also liked the description of
>the summit at:
http://www.extropy.org/summit.htm
Thanks!
>Just one small problem: When you want to donate 15$ by Paypal and click
>the Paypal link, you are then offered to donate 25$ :-) I didn't mind
>but some may object...
Yes. David McFadzean pointed this out a few days ago and it was corrected.
Also, don't take offence in this, but I think you need a professional
web designer. The website, though it contains very nice graphical ideas,
has various bugs and problems. This may not project an optimal image,
which is a shame if you invest in getting attention.
>Just one thing on the press release, I find the sentence "Innovator
>Extropy Institute Sponsors Vital Progress VP Summit To Address
>Human Rights for the Future " a little difficult to parse for the
>beginning of a press release (I think it is the "Vital Progress VP
>Summit" which is a bit confusing, but maybe only to my non-English eye).
Okay, will take a look at and make smoother.
Great suggstions Jacques -
Natasha
natashavita at earthlink.net wrote:
> Extropes and other Trans: Please check out the press release and give me
> your feedback!
>
> Thanks,
> Natasha
> _______________________________________________________________
>
> PRESS RELEASE DATE: JANUARY 30, 2004
> CONTACT: info at extropy.org
> www.extropy.org
> 512.263.2749 U.S.
>
> BIOETHICS COUNCIL IS BEING QUESTIONED BY FUTURISTS WHO ENCOURAGE CRITICAL
> THINKING ABOUT THE FUTURE
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