[extropy-chat] VP Summit - Press Release - Comments Please!

natashavita at earthlink.net natashavita at earthlink.net
Fri Jan 30 23:36:35 UTC 2004


From: JDP jacques at dtext.com


>Great initiative and nice press release. I also liked the description of 
>the summit at:

http://www.extropy.org/summit.htm

Thanks!

>Just one small problem: When you want to donate 15$ by Paypal and click 
>the Paypal link, you are then offered to donate 25$ :-) I didn't mind 
>but some may object...

Yes. David McFadzean pointed this out a few days ago and it was corrected.
Also, don't take offence in this, but I think you need a professional 
web designer. The website, though it contains very nice graphical ideas, 
has various bugs and problems. This may not project an optimal image, 
which is a shame if you invest in getting attention.

>Just one thing on the press release, I find the sentence "Innovator 
>Extropy Institute Sponsors Vital Progress “VP” Summit To Address
>Human Rights for the Future " a little difficult to parse for the 
>beginning of a press release (I think it is the "Vital Progress “VP” 
>Summit" which is a bit confusing, but maybe only to my non-English eye).

Okay, will take a look at and make smoother.

Great suggstions Jacques -

Natasha


natashavita at earthlink.net wrote:

> Extropes and other Trans:  Please check out the press release and give me
> your feedback!
> 
> Thanks,
> Natasha
> _______________________________________________________________
> 
> PRESS RELEASE DATE: JANUARY 30, 2004 
> CONTACT: info at extropy.org 
> www.extropy.org 
> 512.263.2749 U.S. 
> 
> BIOETHICS COUNCIL IS BEING QUESTIONED BY FUTURISTS WHO ENCOURAGE CRITICAL
> THINKING ABOUT THE FUTURE 


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