[extropy-chat] VP Summit - Press Release - Comments Please!

[Adrian Tymes]

--- JDP <jacques at dtext.com> wrote:
> Just one thing on the press release, I find the
> sentence "Innovator 
> Extropy Institute Sponsors Vital Progress “VP”
> Summit To Address
> Human Rights for the Future " a little difficult to
> parse for the 
> beginning of a press release (I think it is the
> "Vital Progress “VP” 
> Summit" which is a bit confusing, but maybe only to
> my non-English eye).

It's nonstandard usage.  Standard usage would be
"Vital
Progress (VP) Summit".  But the length of that
sentence
may also play a part: I'd suggest at least dropping
"Innovator", since the emphasis is on the summit.