[ExI] newspeak contest

[spike at rainier66.com]

I use primarily Grok, but sometimes consult GPT5.4 nano.

 

I decided to give both a chance with the prompt: write a love letter to my
wife in OrwEllian Newspeak.

 

GPT:

 

My dearest comrade-wife,

 

I affirm that our union is necessary, proper, and good. I speak, not for
selfish will, but for the great we. Your eyes are clear with loyalty; your
smile is right-minded; your hands are warm with duty. In your presence, my
thoughts become obedient, and my heart is simplified into one clean purpose:
you.

 

I renounce all irrational separations. 

I reject coldness as counter-revolutionary. I choose togetherness, always.
Let the world be loud with doubt-our home remains stable, our bond
unbreakable, our love correct.

 

I swear: I am yours. You are ours. We will continue, with steadfast
affection, through every day that is permitted, because it is good, and
because it is us.

 

Yours, in endless we-love,
comrade-husband

 

 

 

Grok 4.3:

 

Dear wife,

You are goodthink, doublepluswise in my life. Your face is joyglow to my
day. 

 

I gronever with you, feelplusful and warmful. No crimethink or oldthink can
part us. 

 

Our love is bellyfeel true, strongful, unbreakful.

 

With you, life is speakwrite, free from ungood. 

 

You are my joyfeel, my heartfull, my allgood partner. 

 

Together we are freeplus, doublepluslove, doublestrong.

 

Forever loveplus,
Your truefriend and partner

 

 

 

Both are double plusgood.  Grok is closer to what I imagined from the book.

 

spike

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